I was recently irritated by two UK copywriters, NH and MF, who lurk on a LinkedIn copywriting forum and spend a lot of time bashing what I do, which is direct marketing (DM), often also called direct response (DR).

NH calls direct response advertising “huckster crap” and grudgingly admits that some young copywriters today are moving to DM only because “in some markets it works”. But he doesn’t think much about those markets or writers.

I explained to NH that I find the opposite: youngsters today are fleeing from DM, preferring more trendy marketing channels including SEO, blogging, content marketing, and social media.

Why? Because direct response sells, and both new media evangelists as well as many old-school Madison Avenue copywriters alike seem to find selling somewhat shameful…as incredible as that sounds.

Also, in DM, copywriters who don’t know how to sell are naked and exposed.

In direct response, the results of your efforts can be measured down to the penny.

And a lot of writers hate that, because when their stuff doesn’t work, they are unmasked as the poseurs they are.

I agree with MF’s observation that many youngsters flee DM “as it is seen as the unsexy side of advertising”.

But I cannot fathom why copywriter MF says, and so many copywriters agree, that “It’s more fun to work on big budget ads and TV…some would rather enjoy their working life building a brand rather than a bank balance.”

If indulging your creative whims on the most elaborate and expensive ad campaigns you can conceive, and then explaining to the client why their sales did not go up as you flushed their millions down the toilet, is fun—then yes, I guess branding is fun.

To MF I say: Hey dummy, do you understand that companies pay you to build their brands precisely because they also want to build their bank balance, otherwise known as the bottom line?

MF concludes: “DM has its place, but it’s usually only those creatives who don’t succeed in above-the-line advertising who find themselves sucked into it.”

I will offer a contrary view: The best copywriters who, by definition, are tops at generating sales, are drawn to DM because they can see immediate rewards for themselves and their clients.

Often the worst copywriters go into branding and above-the-line advertising because, with no accountability, these hacks lack the selling chops to get consumers to actually buy their clients’ products—and in general advertising, they can get away with it.

Then NH kicks his demonstrated stupidity into higher gear. He writes: “America being so much bigger than the UK must have a large simple-minded underclass who will still respond to DM’s crude promises and hand over money for stuff they really don’t need or can’t afford, be it a lawn mower or an insurance policy.”

Let’s break down NH’s moronic utterance: First, he insults our vast middle class by calling us simple-minded. I have seen no data supporting the assertion that the American middle class is not as intelligent as the middle class in Europe or the Far East.

Second, he accuses DM of selling stuff people don’t really need.

The fact is, products fall into two categories: must-have and nice-to-have—the latter being, as NH calls it, stuff people don’t really need.

I ask: What is wrong with selling products that people want and are nice to have? The reality is that most products are in this category. And sellers of nice-to-have products advertise heavily and actively with both direct marketing and general advertising.

For instance, most luxury cars are sold using TV commercials, full-page color magazine ads, and the Internet.

Consumers don’t need luxury cars, because a Toyota driven at 60 mph will get you to work just as quickly as a BMW driven 60 mph. As a Prius owner, I have proven this through testing.

And, luxury car advertising is selling stuff that consumers clearly cannot afford. The proof: approximately 90% of consumers cannot buy their cars without a loan. And if you can’t afford to pay cash for your car, then I contend that car is too expensive for you.

The last word on creativity in advertising vs. selling in advertising? David Ogilvy, my copywriting hero and NH’s former boss, whom NH frequently denigrates: “If it doesn’t sell, it isn’t creative.”

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

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The power of negative thinking

Posted May 10th, 2014 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

In his book “Breakthrough Copywriting”, copywriting ace David Garfinkel teaches a persuasion principle he calls “negative optimism”, which he defines as “the optimal use of negative thinking in your copy”.

Here are the steps to writing copy based on negative optimism:

1. Acknowledge the negative thoughts and emotions the prospect may be thinking or feeling; e.g., “You think you got problems. I’m sure you do. We all have problems. I remember…”

2. Validate these negatives by talking about your own experience or about someone else’s experience. Talk about how hopeless and overwhelmed you felt.

Note: If you can’t talk about it from your own personal experience, don’t make something up. Find someone who had this experience, understand what it was, and talk about it from their point of view.

3. Reveal that you found a solution and then transition by promising to share your solution with your prospect.

Subscriber SM, a successful freelance copywriter, writes: “A potential client contacted me. He wants me to guarantee results.

“I told him no copywriter can guarantee an increase in conversion, although there’s a strong chance if there’s a budget for ample testing, and the client has globs of traffic.

“One of these days, I’d love for you to write a blog/e-mail about potential clients who scream for a guarantee. I think all copywriters would love to hear your thoughts based on your experience.

“On the one hand I have to say, ‘I’m going to help you get results’ but there are too many variables to guarantee a lift in conversion.”

My answer is simple, and I include it in all my client agreements for every copywriting project I take on: “There are many factors in your marketing—product, market, price, list, demand, consumer preferences, competition, major events—that Bob cannot control. Therefore, he does not promise and cannot guarantee specific results.”

The most important thing to note is that the client and I discuss—and the client agrees to—this term in advance.

Now, let’s drill down deeper.

To begin with, SM is right: You cannot promise a specific result e.g., 7% conversion on your landing page.

If you could, it would mean every promotion you write is a guaranteed winner…and no copywriter has that ability.

If I could in fact write a winner every time out, I would own my own island by now…and Bill Gates would be my houseboy while George Soros washed my Rolls in the driveway.

So you can’t promise and deliver a given result, either specific (e.g., 5% response on a postcard mailing) or general (e.g., your promotion will make money for the client).

What you CAN guarantee or promise is that if your copy does not deliver a certain level of response, you will compensate the client in some way.

That compensation is either giving back part of your fee (or not charging for any balance due) or re-doing the work at no charge.

My contract promises neither. It clearly states that I am paid when the work is done, regardless of sales or response produced by the copy.

And that works both ways: If the package generates a million in sales instead of the forecast $100,000, the client keeps all the money and I do not get a cut.

The reason, as the clause I quoted from my contract states, is that there are many factors in a client’s marketing—product, market, price, list, traffic, demand, consumer preferences, competition, major events—that we copywriters have no control over.

Example: I arranged for my client SH to distribute an HTML e-mail, offering a free report I wrote for him, to an opt-in e-list of a few thousand names, provided by a reputable list broker for around $1,500.

A few days before the scheduled e-blast, SH told me he had found another list source, one I have never heard of, who would distribute his e-mail to a few thousand names for $250.

Though I explained to SH the likelihood was that this cheap list was garbage, he decided to go against my advice and use it.

It bombed. SH has, I hope, learned a lesson on how a factor other than copy can determine the outcome of a promotion. And you can see why copy alone cannot assure results.

Here’s another problem with guaranteeing results: What if the client changes some of the copy in a way that ruins its effectiveness, and then tells you that ‘your’ copy didn’t work?

If the copy was changed, how can the copywriter be held accountable for what the client did behind his back and without his approval or involvement?

In my opinion, the only way one could even remotely consider offering a guarantee is to insist the client run the promotion exactly as you wrote it, without changing a word unless the copywriter makes and approves any change.

And I have yet to meet the client who will adhere to that if, when he reads your draft, it is not 100% to his liking.

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

Hire a copywriter or write it yourself?

Posted April 11th, 2014 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

According to top copywriter John Carlton, when it comes to hiring a freelance copywriter, you have decided that either your own copywriting skills are not up to the task, or you should hire a pro because it will save you time and get better results, assuming you can afford it.

“There’s a cost to everything, which includes both the dollars involved, and your time and invested energy, all balanced against the odds of success,” says John.

“If you save time doing certain things yourself, and the results are abysmal, how much have you really saved?” John sensibly asks. “Or, if you write a check that makes your hand shake to a top copywriter who produces something that opens the wealth spigot on your head, how much did that writer ‘cost’ you?”

Lose The Jargon

Posted March 7th, 2014 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

Stop using all the same buzzwords as your competitors like “fully leverage”, “fully optimize”, “most comprehensive”, “drives maximum efficiency”, “seamlessly integrated”, “mission-critical”, “innovative” etc.

Think about explaining your product or service to your 80-year-old grandma, and then use those same words in your marketing. Does she know what “fully leverage big data” means? Probably not. Reduce the noise around your core value proposition and make it simple and clear what your one special thing is without using jargon as a communications crutch.

Source: Brian Ladyman, Today@TargetMarketing, 2/5/14

In what is probably a foolish waste of time, I occasionally get suckered into disagreements with “creative” type copywriters on a LinkedIn discussion group.

I know I shouldn’t get embroiled, but I cannot let some of their blatantly ignorant commentary on marketing pass.

I was shocked recently by a comment from NH, a UK copywriter who takes pride in the fact that he is an “above the line (ATL)” copywriter.

ATL refers to creative advertising for big ad agencies producing brand advertising for major consumer accounts.

NH, who once worked for Ogilvy when Ogilvy was still there, expressed what I consider at best disregard and at worst contempt for the great sage of advertising.

He recounted that, how when you joined Ogilvy back then, you were given two things: a map of the building and a copy of Ogilvy on Advertising.

“Only one was useful to us,” said NH—and it was the map.

He continued: “You don’t understand, Bob. No one above the line cares tuppence. The old master’s insights are now just part of the fabric of advertising. No one needs to go back to the source.”

Hmmm. If Ogilvy’s insights are now “part of the fabric of advertising,” then how do you explain all the bad advertising today that violates his rules?

I posted my reply as follows:

“For a copywriter to say that a map of the building had more value to him than Ogilvy on Advertising is to publicly admit that he is a fraud and an ignoramus. How do you sleep at night?

“For a working copywriter to say that he has no use for Ogilvy on Advertising is like a doctor saying Gray’s Anatomy is of no value to him.”

I relate this incident because it illustrates a major complaint of mine: people in marketing (or in any other field) who practice without thorough and careful study of the important literature in the field.

I think it was insurance billionaire A.L. Williams who once said, “Everything you need to know is contained in books.”

Today, we expand books to include online information sources, but the basic idea is sound: you will gain much quicker and greater mastery of any field of knowledge or skill if you study the instructional writings of its best practitioners.

At copywriting seminars, I like to ask the attendees how many of them have read “Scientific Advertising” by Claude Hopkins, a book Ogilvy said anyone who wants to succeed in advertising should read seven times.

In an average group of 100, one or two people—if that—will raise their hand. And increasingly these days, no one does.

My old friend, the late, great mail order guru Jerry Buchanan, complained publicly that people would order his how-to manuals, and then, when they called him to ask questions, it became obvious that they never even read the books they’d bought from him.

Jerry would tell them: “You are starving to death with a loaf of bread under each arm.”

Too many marketers, young and old, struggle with problems and challenges that have already been asked and answered in how-to publications available to them with a few mouse clicks.

To help you solve this problem, here is an article I wrote for DM News on 10 classic marketing books I think every marketer should read.

Don’t write to tell me, “Bob, these are all old marketing books. Don’t you read any more contemporary marketing books?”

Yes, I do, and here are a few of those I also recommend.

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

GR, a freelance writer and marketing ignoramus, decided, in spite of her lack of knowledge, to deliver a mini-lecture on marketing writing on an online discussion group.

GR wrote: “In today’s market, stay away from advertising. Advertising doesn’t work. Copywriting is finished. If you want to sell, you must write content, not advertising. Consumers respond to content. They hate advertising.”

Here’s the problem with GR’s thinking in a nutshell: it isn’t true.

Oh, don’t get me wrong. Content marketing works. I know—I’ve been using it aggressively and almost continuously since 1980.

Content marketing has a lot of benefits. Mainly, it helps convince the prospect that you are an expert in your industry and that you know what you are talking about. And people like to buy from experts.

However, content is piss poor at closing sales and getting the order. And that’s where copywriting shines.

The reason is that, at its lowest level, content is merely that—content. Information.

And you are not in business to write and give away free information. You are in business to make sales and profits.

Copy, by comparison, is deliberately constructed—using some very sophisticated techniques and formulas—to persuade a total stranger to give you money in exchange for your product or service.

One of those many formulas that copywriters master through long years of study and practice is the 5-step Motivating Sequence.

Content writers, have you heard of it? Can you name all 5 steps in the correct order? If not, I guarantee your writing does not sell nearly as well as it could.

Here is an article I wrote about it years ago for DM News.

Why do many young writers sing the praises of content marketing today while looking down on copywriting?

My theory—and yes, I know this is going to offend some of my readers big time—is that content marketing is EASIER than copywriting…by far.

When it comes to writing content—say, for instance, a good speech—there is a degree of skill and intelligence required, but not a lot of technique.

By comparison, writing a winning long-copy sales letter, one that raises conversion rates vs. the control by 25% to 50%, there is a huge amount of know-how, experience, and tricks of the trade needed to pull it off.

As a result, there are more content writers out there than you can shake a stick at.

While they vary in skill and quality, safe to say it’s relatively easy to find a freelance writer who can churn out acceptable content.

Copywriters are another story…

Yes, there are also today, thanks to AWAI and others promoting copywriting as a business opportunity, more copywriters out there than you can shake a stick at.

But with copywriting, the number in the first tier … those who write copy well enough to command top-dollar fees and repeat assignments from major league direct marketers … is a far smaller, select, and more manageable group.

On average, by my rough calculation, a good copywriter can earn 5 to 10 times higher annual wages than a good content writer.

There is a reason for this: great copy is a valuable commodity. It is rarer than great content writing with a much higher ROI.

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

The worst thing about freelance copywriting (or any other type of writing) is this: You write a brilliant piece that you are absolutely in love with. You submit it to your client or editor. And the client call or e-mails – and to your utter amazement says, “I hate this. It stinks.”

How can you prevent this unpleasant event and ensure your clients’ satisfaction? Here are a few ideas that work:

1. Listen and capture.

Often when you ask the client about his business or product, he will articulate its benefits in a clear and powerful way. Write down what he says, and incorporate the best of this verbiage in your copy. Not only is it accurate, but when the client reads it, he’ll be pleased with how you put things (because it accurately reflects how he thinks of the product).

2. Create a pre-approved sentence library.

Especially when dealing with a complex or technical subject, after reviewing the source material, write a bunch of sentences that express your understanding of the technology, function, and features as best you can.

Submit these sentences—no more than 6 to 7 or so—to the client and ask him to review. Incorporate any changes. Now, you have a library of pre-approved sentences you can use in your copy.

Few things upset clients more than the unpleasant surprise of reading a first-draft filled with errors, because it puts the fear into them that you do not understand the product. Using a library of pre-approved sentences eliminates surprises of this nature.

3. Submit 3-5 headlines.

Come up with 3 to 5 headlines—the strongest you can. Instead of picking one and submitting your first draft with it, show the headlines to the client early and let him pick. That way, when he gets your first draft, he is already comfortable with the headline, which is the first thing he sees.

4. Submit the lead early.

As with the headlines, write a 100 to 500-word lead or two, submit them to the client for review and comment, and then make any changes. Again, now when he gets the first draft, you are ensured of no surprises, at least on page one.

5. Use the John Steinbeck writing method.

John Steinbeck said that when you are writing, you must treat it as the most important thing in the world, even when you know it is not. This helps you take the job seriously and do your best on everything you write.

6. Use the Bill Bonner writing method.

Bill Bonner, founder of publishing giant Agora, told copywriter JF that you must believe in what you are selling—at least while you are writing the promotion. If you don’t believe and think the product is hooey, turn down the project. This is why I just turned down a potentially lucrative assignment to promote a course on how to make good business decisions based on astrology.

7. Do not be a prima donna.

When the client makes changes, don’t pout or grumble, even if you disagree with them. For instance, in a copy review last week, the client removed a phrase I thought was really strong—a reference to the Dire Straits song “Money for nothing.” I loved it. But I did not argue.

Copywriter Cam Foote always said he considered his first draft a recommendation – and after that, he would acquiesce pleasantly. David Ogilvy said, “Fight over your queen; let the pawns go.”

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

I just got around to reading the 9/16/13 issue of BtoB magazine (now folded into Ad Age), which featured a special supplement in which supposedly top B2B ad agencies showcased their print advertising and web work.

I was blown away…but not in a good way.

Just look at a random sampling of their awful headlines:

ROO

Growmentum

Wake Up

Make What Matters

The Legend Continues

Bring It

It’s Tougher Than the Leading Competition

The Hear Yourself Think Space

Work Will Never Be the Same

Nobody Said You Couldn’t Have It All

Outta Here

Connect With Investors on a Different Scale

If I handed in copy with these headlines, my clients would summarily reject it. And possibly have me shot.

Yet these headlines are from ad agencies handling big-name accounts including American Express, WebMD, Teledyne Controls, Honeywell, Corning, and dozens more.

A few things that make most of the ads I saw suck:

>> Weak headlines that state no specific benefit and no UPS.

>> Ads with no headlines.

>> Headlines that were a single word or a made-up word and therefore said next to nothing.

>> Impossible-to-read body copy in tiny type, wide paragraphs, and printed against a color background instead of white.

>> Weak offers or no offers.

>> No incentive to act now.

You’d think any good copywriter would be a godsend to these agencies.

But I fear not: I believe they are incapable of either writing or recognizing good copy.

It’s a crying shame.

David Ogilvy, John Caples, and Claude Hopkins are turning over in their graves.

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

How To Get More Sales, Fewer Refunds by Bob Bly

Posted December 18th, 2013 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

Subscriber DN, whom we heard from last week, asked yet another interesting question: “Bob, I’ve purchased information products from you, and found your information to be sound, but nowhere near as good as your sales letter makes it out to be.”

Talk about a back-handed compliment…

She continues, “I am sure your refund rates would reduce if you avoid the hype, clever copy, and amplification in your sales letters…but so would your sales. You can’t have it both ways. So what say you?”

DN raises an extremely important point that I have struggled with daily in my 34 years as a professional copywriter, namely, balancing the promise of benefits in the sales copy with the delivery of those benefits by the product.

A common piece of advice to marketers is to under-promise and over-deliver.

The idea is that customers are happy when they get what they paid for but are ecstatically happy when they get MORE than they thought they had any right to expect for their money.

My friend, ace Internet marketer Fred Gleeck, has a rule of thumb: the product should be so good that if the customer had paid 10X the price, he would still be happy and not ask for a refund.

That ratio is sensible in theory, but difficult to achieve in practice.

For instance, one of my copywriting heroes, GB, sold a $5,000 copywriting boot camp to his list—an amazing feat in today’s troubled economic times.

As good as it no doubt was, I am not sure the attendees would have felt they got their money’s worth if they had paid $50,000 each. Or that he would have gotten any registrations at that price.

So here are the rules I follow as a copywriter and an information marketer when writing my sales letters and creating my products:

1. Write the strongest sales copy possible within the limitations of being ethical and truthful.

Remember, you must convince the reader that your product can solve their problem…and do so more ably than competing products.

Your competitors are pulling out all the stops in their copy. So yours can’t be meek and mild.

2. When in doubt, it is in fact better to under-promise and over-deliver. The customer should feel that she has gotten more than her money’s worth.

However…

3. Do not deliberately set the bar so low in your copy that you write bland, ultra-safe promotions. When you do so, you won’t make sales.

4. If you feel compelled to write low-key copy as an apology for a mediocre product, you should instead write the strongest copy you can and then improve your product so it will delight anyone who buys in response to that copy.

My copywriting teacher at NYU, the late Milt Pierce, told us that he was hired to write a direct mail package to sell a book written by a famous interior decorator.

When the marketing director got Milt’s draft, she gasped: “This is great copy but this isn’t what’s in the book,” she objected.

“It should be,” Milt countered. He says the publisher made the author rewrite the book to deliver on all the promises made in the copy.

5. There is a rule of thumb that refund rates on infoproducts should be less than 10% and ideally 5% or less. Our refund rate a few years ago was around 2%.

Now, selling those same products, the refund rate is 5.2% for the year to date. The most common reason for the refund request by far: “This product has a copyright date of 2010 or earlier and therefore I think it is out of date.” They are wrong, of course, but you can’t fight city hall, which is why we are in a massive program of updating our core infoproducts.

Some argue that a zero refund rate is bad, because it means your copy was so mild, it did not make enough strong promises. I understand the logic of this theory, though I would not object to a zero refund rate.

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

1. Fear
2. Greed
3. Guilt
4. Anger
5. Exclusivity
6. Salvation
7. Flattery

Source: Denny Hatch, “The Secrets of Emotional, Hot-Button Copywriting,” Direct Marketing IQ, p. 8

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But it’s not just bulk. He’s actually made my life easy because now whenever I want to sit down and write a kick-butt e-mail, ad or sales letter, I can just navigate right to the section I need. Everything is searchable so you can quickly and easily find swipe files for any sales copy you need. It feels like cheating!

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3 ways to add specific urgency to your copy

Posted November 14th, 2013 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

1. Establish a hard deadline. Specifics are always more convincing. Example: Midnight, Monday, November 25, 2013.

2. Put your deadline in the subject line or make it part of your outer envelope teaser; e.g. “3 days ’til Thanksgiving—SAVE 35% NOW!”

3. Don’t be shy about where you place the deadline or how many times you repeat it. You never know where a scanner’s eye will land first.

Source: Pat Friesen, Today@TargetMarketing, 10/17/13

Stop Writing Sales Letters The Hard Way!

Posted November 14th, 2013 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

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Sounds too good to be true?

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I’m excited to share this with you “The Robert Collier Letter Book“.

This is a lovingly recreated and brand new, digital reproduction of the book that many top marketers & copywriters have lauded as “the most important book on copywriting ever written”.

This reproduction is from the almost impossible-to-find 3rd edition print copy released in 1931 & includes 140+ examples of successful salesletters written by Collier himself.

A must for any aspiring copywriter, author and marketing Pro’s digital bookshelf (this is probably the most comprehensive “TRUE SECRETS” guide to writing responsive copy ever).

Robert Collier’s Letter Book helped shape the entire marketing and advertising industry as we know it today…

If you want to discover what really makes people ‘tick’ (and buy) then this all-time classic book is something I know you’ll treasure.

Learn Copywriting Faster Than Ever Before

Posted October 16th, 2013 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

Witness The Birth Of The Copywriter’s Brain

This new tool presents the best collection of masterful copywriting tips, techniques and other key concepts, in a way that’s so clear, that using it virtually ‘burns’ the mindset of great copywriters into your head!

Unlike most tools and programs that just sink you deep into overwhelm with pages & pages or hours and hours of content, the ‘Copywriter’s Brain’ is a clear, concise, and tremendously powerful ONE-PAGE document!

* Yes, it’s a one-page document. *

And while that may seem counter-intuitive, the level of EXTREME simplicity is actually what makes this so spine-tingling brilliant!

Does anything you’ve seen before do this?

** A Combination Of The Greatest Copywriting Minds In A Single Source…

The Copywriter’s Brain combines the best ideas from the best copywriters on the planet into a sort of copywriting ‘super-brain’ (with all the redundant ideas removed and non-essential fluff eliminated).

- All that’s left is nothing but pure gold!

** Instantly See The BIG Picture

The Copywriter’s Brain instantly gives you a full ‘birds-eye’ overview on the dark art of copywriting in a single glance.

- Experiencing it for the first time is like consuming a gushing fire hose of knowledge and understanding!

** Burn It Into Your Brain

The Copywriter’s Brain not only contains valuable info, but it wraps it in a logical structure using colours, and graphics (proven memory aids) to burn all that copywriting goodness into your brain.

If you want to write better copy, tweak your pages and sell more stuff then you need this incredible tool for your online business right now!

In the heydays of Madison Avenue, a great premium was placed on “creativity” in advertising. Now it rapidly becomes irrelevant.

To many practitioners back then, this largely meant coming up with ad campaigns that were fun and entertaining.

This type of creative advertising has been glorified on TV shows including The Crazy Ones and Mad Men.

Of course, there were numerous exceptions. The late, great David Ogilvy said, “If it doesn’t sell, it isn’t creative.”

Today, many practitioners of brand advertising value creativity highly. Some seem to value it above all else.

In direct marketing, we often take a different approach: we study what has been working lately.

Then we either model our promotions after those that work or at least apply some of the ideas and techniques.

Example: CC, a superstar copywriter, had written a promotion for a vision supplement with the headline, “Why bilberry and leutin don’t work.”

I creatively copied that headline for a promotion I was writing for trading software: “Why most trading systems don’t work…and never will.” That promotion tripled the sales of the control.

That’s what we direct marketers call “creative plagiarism”. I did not steal CC’s headline. I adapted the formula for a different product.

Why does using the tried and true frequently trump creativity?

Most advertising doesn’t work. JH, a top fundraising copywriter, said only one in ten promotions he wrote was a runaway winner…but that more than made up for the other nine.

So the chances of your ‘creative’ ad working are maybe one in ten.

On the other hand, if you model your promotion after successful ones, the odds of success increase geometrically.

Of course we hope that we can hit on a big idea that is original and therefore blows the doors off the competition.

But if that doesn’t come about, creatively plagiarizing proven winners reduces the odds of your writing a promotion which bombs.

Early in my career, I had several Madison Avenue ad agencies as clients.

Back in the day, Madison Avenue ad executives were accused by clients—rightly so, in some cases—of pushing the creative envelope to win awards, which they seemed more focused on than the bottom line.

It was easy for the ad agencies to be so bold, some reasoned, because they weren’t risking their own money on running the creative ads.

If sales went up, they credited their brilliant advertising. If they fell, the ad guys blamed it on the product or the market.

Example: Ad agency Crispin Bogusky gained the respect of Madison Avenue “creatives” with their edgy Burger King marketing including the Subservient Chicken online promotion.

Between 2003—the year before Burger King hired Crispin as agency of record—and 2008, Burger King’s share of the burger-chain market fell from 15.6% to 14.2% while McDonald’s share rose from 43.6% to 46.8%.

During those years, McDonald’s has posted average annual sales growth of 6.3% compared with BK’s 2.9% gain during that period.

Bob Bly is the author of “World’s Best Copywriting Secrets” and has written copy for more than 100 companies including IBM, Boardroom, Medical Economics and AT&T. He is the author of more than 75 books and a columnist for Target Marketing, Early To Rise and The Writer. McGraw-Hill calls him “America’s top copywriter”.

Get more response to free content offers.

Posted September 10th, 2013 by Nelson Tan. Filed under Copywriting

You can dramatically increase response to free content offers for lead generation by showing an image of the front cover of the white paper, e-book, report, or CD you are giving away in your e-mail or landing page. In an HTML e-mail, place the image to the right of the headline.

In a direct mail package, show the cover on the reply element. In a print ad, show a picture of your offer in the bottom right corner of the page. On a landing page, place the image in the upper half of the screen.

Add more or larger “secure offer” icons, e.g. not just “VeriSign” but “McAfee Secure” and “BBB” and a whopping big, well-designed “100% Satisfaction Guarantee” icon to your web pages. Aim for at least 5 icons per reply page.

Test placement of these trust logos. Some research says that the single best place isn’t at the top of the page or at the bottom, but rather right under or next to the “Place Your Order” button.

Source: The Copywriter’s Roundtable, 8/6/13.


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